Tuesday, December 6, 2016

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I don't care if you hurt or suffer
I'll do things that bloats my ego
being the best, no other contender
adulation to me is like libido..
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Phoenix1 Smith
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Seamus O Brian 06 December 2016

My dear poet, you have fired a whole quiver of deadly arrows at this target of unmanly manliness. I hope you have had not too much close up inspiration for the (righteous) venom that seeps from each condemning line of this work. If this indeed springs from personal experience, I pray thee fire your arrows and then retire to a more honorable circumstance. Powerfully written, good poet. Bravo.

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Phoenix1 Smith 06 December 2016

Dear Mr. Beightol sir, this work is purely just part of my uncontrollable imagination...it is nothing personal.. It is indeed though flattering to know that I have made a reader imagine that this work is a reality.... Thank you very much sir.. I am humbled...

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Seamus O Brian 07 December 2016

Then, my dear poet, I am even more impressed with your imagination. :)

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