Sunday, February 17, 2008

Insecure Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Will you hold my hand, if I reach to you?
Will you hear if I shall call?
Many a times we will be far away,
Will you miss my presence at all? ?
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ritika vineeta
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anurag duggal 24 May 2009

nice poem...its a good description of missing someone

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Shekhar Joshi 24 May 2009

reminds me of this enrique song...hero.... your poem is more like a song but yeah its different from tht 1 good one

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 May 2009

Lucid and lovely, like it.

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K. V. Venkataramana 02 April 2008

Truly an impressive write. Keep writing more and more and spread cheer all around.

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Sreelekha Premjit 17 February 2008

well said, liked ur simple yet evocative style, thanks

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