Wednesday, August 15, 2007

Insects Comments

Rating: 5.0

Japanese beetle lace
hangs as delecately
as moth-eaten curtains
shrouding the field
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Ayn Timmerman
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Goldy Locks 18 October 2007

Genuinely confused with the final sentence. Love the opening imagery. You are a smart, clever writer. With a keen eye. Develop, sharpen it. best care, sjg

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