You are my sweetest downfall
Wash these words in the morning light
To pound this styrofoam insect sight
These obligations pull the noose so tight
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There's real feeling there in this poem and some others of yours. And some gritty, often moving, original language: scrape your love from the floor, wash these words with the morning light. Now, those are powerful arrangements of some well-chosen words. Keep writing.
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There's real feeling there in this poem and some others of yours. And some gritty, often moving, original language: scrape your love from the floor, wash these words with the morning light. Now, those are powerful arrangements of some well-chosen words. Keep writing.