Tuesday, January 23, 2018

Insatiable Longings Comments

Rating: 5.0

I long to be by your side
To burn in the flame of love's fire
Touch and feel your passion's fervour
Supping it to my heart's desire
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Valsa George
COMMENTS
Glen Kappy 01 March 2018

Hi, Valsa! It’s been a while since I visited your poems, so I’m just reading this. I like it and think the first stanza favorably compares with anything anytime like it. The use of the verb supping there strikes me as fresh and perfect. Hoping this finds you wellin all ways, Glen

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Simone Inez Harriman 20 February 2018

Such romance in this longing to be at the absent ones side. How calm and right the world can feel when are with the one you truly love. In the face of great adversity or eminent death one is lucky to have the one we love giving us hope or strength. Beautiful poem Valsa.....10+

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Anil Kumar Panda 14 February 2018

A beautiful poem on love. with its smooth flow and rhyming it feels good reading it. Thanks for sharing. Enjoyed.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 February 2018

It's a sparkling piece of poetry! Loved the powerful poetic imagination! I enjoy reading it again and again! Thanks dear madam for sharing this fascinating piece of poetry with us!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 February 2018

Dear madam, you have nicely justified the title of the poem. It is a beautiful poem on longing. I appreciate it.10

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Nosheen Irfan 07 February 2018

A lovely romantic write n a perfect graphic. Full of passion, a piece to awaken the senses. The purity of feelings expressed in a truly poetic way. A big 10.

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Indira Renganathan 03 February 2018

The title is superb...it is modest as much as the birds in the photo...the content is pleasing as the sonata of love... a careful, deft write Valsa...thank you...thanks a lot for your visit to my page and the comment on my poem too....God bless you

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Akhtar Jawad 02 February 2018

One who longs to be on the side of nature and is lost in the sonata of love is blossomed as as a red rose. We can see that beautiful one in the colors, we can feel one spreading as aroma. A great poem Valsa George.

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Loke Kok Yee 29 January 2018

This poem will melt a heart of stone And exposed the lost love it had known Your poem had with eloquence shown That mother earth is with love bestrewn Thank s Valsa.

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Savita Tyagi 26 January 2018

Such a beautiful and romantic poem. Our longings are breath of our life. Loved that picture too.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 January 2018

To be lost in the sonata of love... A lovely poem indeed. I enjoyed every line.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 January 2018

‘Insatiable Longings’ is a lovely poem thoroughly romantic! The fourth stanza is quite fascinating and the last line of the poem is the epitome! Two doves appended in the picture are absolutely magnificent! Loved the way it is embellished in poetic cottons manufactured from a lovely poetic heart! ……………..10

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