Monday, February 27, 2017

Insatiable Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the distance
i see an oasis

a paradise of efflorescence
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Sarah E.S.
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Bill Cantrell 27 February 2017

You are not at all new to poetry, I can tell, this poem speaks volumes with the appearance of simplicity, the rhythm is a well crafted flow and the emotions are very controlled with focus, great job! !

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Denis Mair 27 February 2017

You are lucky your soul can give itself to those visions. Your soul reaches out, and after the vision crumbles you keep going. All the ingredients of a great journey are here.

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