In the distance
i see an oasis
a paradise of efflorescence
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You are lucky your soul can give itself to those visions. Your soul reaches out, and after the vision crumbles you keep going. All the ingredients of a great journey are here.
You are not at all new to poetry, I can tell, this poem speaks volumes with the appearance of simplicity, the rhythm is a well crafted flow and the emotions are very controlled with focus, great job! !