Insanity Begins Comments

`Drink your passion.Be in disgrace.' Rumi dear asif, its a great job.

Well done. It is a great poem no doubt.

deep, emotional poem portraying a terrible life. very inspiring, thanks

This is a very very good poem....so well structured...so very well expressed..probably one of the best I read ever....10

Correct hopeless to hopelessness. Well conceived thought and well built up

The intense insanity of the poem is wonderful. Thank you.

beautiful stanza, I love this one from you

A very sad and dark verse - but very well written with repeated lines for needed emphasis. Reads well. a ten is deserved.

A very sad and dark verse - but very well written with repeated lines for needed emphasis. Reads well. a ten is deserved.