Wednesday, May 19, 2010

Insanity Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ages after ages I’ve loved you
In the incessant noise of my life I’ve been waiting
For you, to reach you thru
The tumultuous waves of suffering,
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Arunesh Goswami
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 02 June 2010

‘For you, to reach you thru/The tumultuous waves of suffering, /Ah! it becomes a habit now’…wow! Habit excellent ‘In the insanity of romance, still shy/To break the bars of thy creed yelling His name. this His [in uppercase] may be poet indicates beloved is Beloved…here Insanity justifiable Crafted and ‘picked emotionally’ metaphor …without bridle …thanks Bro for such good poem. 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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