Pierce my heart before this pounding stops
Allow me to feel this pain before i go completely numb
Let me live so i may die
Let me posses that maddening beauty
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I love the wrd 'dazzling' it's simply ravishing =] beautiful job -Tyease
hmmmm....interesting... i like. thanks for sharing
that's exquisitely done........you stringed the words together in a wonderful way.........the line i liked most(though i liked all of it) is 'Let me live so i may die'...... excellent work......... ;) .......