Wednesday, June 17, 2009

Insanity Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pierce my heart before this pounding stops
Allow me to feel this pain before i go completely numb
Let me live so i may die
Let me posses that maddening beauty
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Kayla Nace
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Shekhar Joshi 01 July 2009

that's exquisitely done........you stringed the words together in a wonderful way.........the line i liked most(though i liked all of it) is 'Let me live so i may die'...... excellent work......... ;) .......

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I like how it all comes togeather. Nicely done: -)

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Tyease Collins 28 June 2009

I love the wrd 'dazzling' it's simply ravishing =] beautiful job -Tyease

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hmmmm....interesting... i like. thanks for sharing

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