Insane Or Enlightened? Comments

amazing master piece! challenging engaging! causes the reader to take much in to consideration and be completely spell bound by the writing and never stopping to read till the end. (:

very good job young lady! keep it up!

I feel that no one will understand me and they are out to get me but talking and not keeping things in is better, It is hard to find someone you feel safe to talk to about these dark feelings and insane thoughts. But what makes us insane is trying to fix things on your own and keeping from others, Isolation is not the answer but opening up is fear to overcome and when you do will truly help. You have a natural way of words that shocks me and makes me want to read on. You got a gift and should not be hidden.

This is a fantastic, deep, and though-provoking poem. I really loved it. So much opportunity woven through your lines. -SG x

It is a very deep and insightful poem and such poems are really needed for bringing change in the surroundings :)

make use of rhymings, and make short poem it will attract the reader, , tiffiny, , we are friends don't fill sad write more poem i m wating for your next poem, , , , ALI HUSSAIN

This is a really ambitious poem Tiffany and I like the see-saw you have found between Me and Them. You draw my sympathy by writing simply and clearly. I am compelled to answer the question in the title with the word Enlightened. I love the way in this poem you seem to have become your own best friend. Advice beyond that? Become even clearer. Think of your poem as a little boat for the reader that will have to carry him or her out into the wide ocean. You won't be there to plug any holes. The boat has to be shipshape. Thank you for inviting me to read your poetry.