Tuesday, August 20, 2019

Ins And Outs Comments

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A cat is walking in and
walking out as a tide is going
out and coming in as metro
trains are going out and
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Julia Luber 20 August 2019

And as I suppose you went to In n' Out for a burger later for dinner? Actually, not to make this a trite poem- I actually liked the poem very much. I just couldn't help myself. Nice sense of repetition and mantra

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