Innocents In Hell Comments

DEBORA...RIVETING SLICE OF WORK...STELLAR USE OF IMAGERY ...SOLID CRAFTSMANSHIP & HARD-CORED DELIVERY...I LIKE YOUR STRAIGHT FORWARD STYLE...WILL RE-VISIT YOUR OTHER WORK... '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

Why didn't I see this before? It's heart-rendering. It's well-written (very much so) . It's touching and traumatic and HELL. Well done for this.

HIV is killing human race. I too wrote a poem about the same theme, it's called AIDS. I liked the way this poem progressed. Nice work here. Preets