We sit on your bed
And watch some TV
When I look at you
And you look at me.
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You're writing is beautiful and innocent, I really love it. It reminds me of the things I used to write about, and how I'd write about them when I was your age. Keep writing, really. You've got great potential :) x
There is so many memories with your poetry and I mean it in a complimentary way. Great poem and I remember too myself (smiles) J. L.