Tuesday, February 4, 2014

Innocent Smile That Hurts.... Comments

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Innocent smile shows her jaw
Hands that moves with smile
She was holding her mother’s hand
She was the gift of lonely street
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SALINI NAIR
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Akhtar Jawad 27 December 2014

Be aware her pain is ours……… A heart touching message......................10

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Salini Nair 11 February 2014

thanks all for valuable comments

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Geetha Jayakumar 06 February 2014

Beautiful poem Shalini..Beautiful lines..It s blooded as a pelt of manhood... Be aware her pain is ours…Very true said her Innocent smile that hurts...I loved reading each lines..

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Kee Thampi 05 February 2014

narrow pink line of life long pain She was holding her mother’s hand She was the gift of lonely street A peep to loss of her life It s blooded as a pelt of manhood Loss of humanity at a glance

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