Hark! thou art in this momment,
Dancin' in love and merriment,
On the bosom of a lone land,
When my life in such a futile sand,
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This is where in poetry fantasy blows the mind away..Superb write and cornerstone
The icon of love the rose so eloquently used in this poem and the reader is enchanted nice...regards
Upon reading this again, it's as if you're asking your loved one to please treat you gently. You've had your heart broken many times, but with her it's a new dawn, and she's like an innocent rose, blooming for the first time. She's the only one you need in your garden, the flower you'd tenderly care for. Truly a beautiful poem, Vipins.
This is an absolutely exquisite poem... I love how you used much language that not many do anymore, and the metaphors grabbed my attention. This is amazing!
That was a very great wonderful poem i lvoed it wiht all my heart
dear friend, your poem innocent rose is a fine work. nice poem. regards binish
Love is the human's reflection over care and possessiveness towards something or someone but sometimes... its hurts and bleed us dry... But the poet is really know how to make us think about flower and forgotten about the thorns. Excellent! ! !
This poem is amazing, I shall definitely continue to read your poems.
For me now thou art an 'innocent rose'.... lovely and beautiful lines....10
Tis a new dawn; so be close! For me now thou art an 'innocent rose'.' Brilliant closing lines.Rose is an ambassador of love that blooms according to modus operany! Nice poem dear vipins.
This 'innocent rose' will surely bring all the good things you've wished for..A beautiful write!
hh God! ! ! ! ! you are really a talented writer, once again you proved it! ! ! ! ! ! (enikku kurachokke manasilayi, enthoru tough language) sanu chechi is correct! ! ! ! !
Yeah! Very sweet poem indeed, thou art a great writter, nice
beautiful poem about the innocent rose. so lovely will she bloom in your garden