Tuesday, December 6, 2011

Innocent Rose! Comments

Rating: 4.6

Hark! thou art in this momment,
Dancin' in love and merriment,
On the bosom of a lone land,
When my life in such a futile sand,
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VIPINS PUTHOORAN
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Heather Wilkins 27 August 2013

beautiful poem about the innocent rose. so lovely will she bloom in your garden

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Allemagne Roßmann 29 September 2012

This is where in poetry fantasy blows the mind away..Superb write and cornerstone

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Ken E Hall 27 December 2011

The icon of love the rose so eloquently used in this poem and the reader is enchanted nice...regards

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Jacqui Broad 23 December 2011

Upon reading this again, it's as if you're asking your loved one to please treat you gently. You've had your heart broken many times, but with her it's a new dawn, and she's like an innocent rose, blooming for the first time. She's the only one you need in your garden, the flower you'd tenderly care for. Truly a beautiful poem, Vipins.

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Salema Khatun 17 December 2011

nice nice nice poem ienjoyed it

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Tiffany M... 17 December 2011

This is an absolutely exquisite poem... I love how you used much language that not many do anymore, and the metaphors grabbed my attention. This is amazing!

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*BleedingHeart* *Arielle* 16 December 2011

That was a very great wonderful poem i lvoed it wiht all my heart

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Hans Vr 15 December 2011

beautifully written love poem. very well done, Vipins.

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Craig Mize 14 December 2011

Very good poem brilliantly written. You have a lot of talent

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Craig Moses Uche 14 December 2011

Luv ur uze of metaphors briliant luv poems.

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Binish Cd 12 December 2011

dear friend, your poem innocent rose is a fine work. nice poem. regards binish

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Malaya Roses 11 December 2011

Love is the human's reflection over care and possessiveness towards something or someone but sometimes... its hurts and bleed us dry... But the poet is really know how to make us think about flower and forgotten about the thorns. Excellent! ! !

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Jacob Ribald 10 December 2011

This poem is amazing, I shall definitely continue to read your poems.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 December 2011

For me now thou art an 'innocent rose'.... lovely and beautiful lines....10

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Sahara Adhikari 09 December 2011

gr8.. u play gr8 with words..

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Cg Shankar 09 December 2011

Tis a new dawn; so be close! For me now thou art an 'innocent rose'.' Brilliant closing lines.Rose is an ambassador of love that blooms according to modus operany! Nice poem dear vipins.

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Dave Walker 08 December 2011

A really beautiful poem, a fantastic write.

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Sonali Sings 08 December 2011

This 'innocent rose' will surely bring all the good things you've wished for..A beautiful write!

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Sajna Kailas 08 December 2011

hh God! ! ! ! ! you are really a talented writer, once again you proved it! ! ! ! ! ! (enikku kurachokke manasilayi, enthoru tough language) sanu chechi is correct! ! ! ! !

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Yeah! Very sweet poem indeed, thou art a great writter, nice

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