Your kiss was the first and everlasting
impression you had given me, that
I knew would last a lifetime
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So romantic this piece. The romance of innocence, love and of course dance all rolled into this beautiful piece. Take Care, Stacey
innocent passion...but burning...expressive write, Bonnie...softly sweetly romantic...10
Your first kiss is always the one that you treasure most of all. Another gem from out of the top drawer Bonnie. Love, Andrew xx
Apropos title, as this work is a textbook paradigm for impassioned expression. I like the wrap-around stazaec structure...a Collins trademark, it would appear... Fine crafting Bonnie-lass! F j R 2009
This is very beautiful Bonnie... LOVE it... I just Imagined you with a blue dress dancing a waltz looking at that someone eyes... very romantic and beautiful. Ana
The imagery of your poems always lingers as does this gorgeous one too. ''dusted with a touch of passion gazed with fire that torched each of our souls' dragged me right into this poem, or should I should say 'passionately pulled me in to a pit of desire.' You are certainly the Queen of Romance. Karin Anderson