Tuesday, February 3, 2009

Innocent Passion Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your kiss was the first and everlasting
impression you had given me, that
I knew would last a lifetime
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Bonnie Collins
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The imagery of your poems always lingers as does this gorgeous one too. ''dusted with a touch of passion gazed with fire that torched each of our souls' dragged me right into this poem, or should I should say 'passionately pulled me in to a pit of desire.' You are certainly the Queen of Romance. Karin Anderson

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Stacey Watts 08 February 2009

So romantic this piece. The romance of innocence, love and of course dance all rolled into this beautiful piece. Take Care, Stacey

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Kesav Easwaran 07 February 2009

innocent passion...but burning...expressive write, Bonnie...softly sweetly romantic...10

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Andrew Blakemore 04 February 2009

Your first kiss is always the one that you treasure most of all. Another gem from out of the top drawer Bonnie. Love, Andrew xx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 04 February 2009

Apropos title, as this work is a textbook paradigm for impassioned expression. I like the wrap-around stazaec structure...a Collins trademark, it would appear... Fine crafting Bonnie-lass! F j R 2009

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Ana Zaldivar 03 February 2009

This is very beautiful Bonnie... LOVE it... I just Imagined you with a blue dress dancing a waltz looking at that someone eyes... very romantic and beautiful. Ana

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Bonnie Collins

Bonnie Collins

Middletown New York
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