Your game of darling doll, mine of the mimic train
Unpopular your doll, always was in my brain
My train would I aim always at your silver doll
Your tears my anger, thus we spent our day all
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young love is a tender experience. lovely and charming. It only happens once in a lifetime. nice write
Innocent love that goes so deep of childhood memories brought back to life so vividly! I really enjoyed this great write!
fabulous my friend.the ending is marvelous.although i feel a little sadness in it. ~nb
First of all congratulation dear poet, u have completed your 100 poems, made a century as well...as for as poem is concern, you always do a great job....what should i say in aspiration, am getting confused, ....i think you should be lecturer in romanticism...hats off
Great write of childhood recollections and love.