Innocent Joys Comments

Liked it very much, Love to read it, Experience it very deeply, the way you presented it is sweet and lovely.

Poetic and sensual; sweet and innocent. A delightful read.

very Imaginative. The simple thoughts of love finding simple joys! Yet creating a world of splendor and a pool of happiness. Is it a dream? is it real? is it a yearning? I love the last two lines. Peace and joy...

When the love blossom within two souls stream of joys sprouts. They forget days and nights. They forget the existence of world.Only they want to make their love more delightful. Under the direction of Radha Lord started dancing even he forgot he was the supreme body. Such is the Divine Love where creatures enjoy the gift of the Divine healing. A very soft sweet and heart soothing write. May God bless you to create more and more poems to express the glory of Creator. Thanks for sharing.

not childish - but polite and lovely and fresh as in childhood! good that you keep it!

That will be my joy when I go to sleep; You and me and You win always. a wonderful portrayal of selfless love. it is egoless love. if all those who love achieve this mental state, it would have been very nice. thank you for this idea that you spread through your poem