Monday, March 7, 2016

Innocent Joys Comments

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I kissed her eyes
with my tongue.
Lifted slowly
the eyelids with my tongue
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Dev Anand
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 October 2018

hope u slept well since ages passed and ages hence lovely kisses more of it u paid no heed to my comments /ADVICE Dave poet friend

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 August 2018

sexy snaps of kisses can't be left out with only kisses how about all the o lalalalaa and hissess you did it can't say no to it lovely kisses with so many misses romantic guy eh

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mmmmmmmm this is to sexy nice work :)

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Anne Yun 11 March 2016

you must be in love. but i just feel it's a little bit too detailed. 'And there i shut her wild wild eyes, with kisses four'- John Keats

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Dev Anand 12 March 2016

Beautiful comparison with Keats. you are well versed in Eng. lit.. thank you poetess. dev

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