Monday, October 15, 2018

Innocent Email Comments

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Innocent email arrived today
From a friend not far away
The content read, then read again
Just saying hello and how are you
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John A'Hern
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Bri Edwards 18 August 2019

Thanks for Poet's Notes. I plan to submit my comment as a poem to my site. :) bri

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John Ahern 18 August 2019

Hi Bri, thank you for taking the time to read the poem. Your comments are indeed a fine offering for your own list of poems.

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Bri Edwards 18 August 2019

3 – (cont.) BUT if I can, physically and mentally close out my time … as I wish, it will be with ice cream in a dish, & with rhyme. Yes, I’ll miss my ‘poet’ friends online when I’m again dust. Yes, I’d say farewell with rhyme, and ice cream IS a must! ! (August …18th ….2019)

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Bri Edwards 18 August 2019

2 - (continued) Nearing My End …[ Passing Time While “Passing Away”; Response to John A’Hern’s P H Poem “Innocent Email” ] I do so hope my worldly belongings will be but few …. when it’s MY time to pass from this world; ‘tis true. Now, not sure when my “end” will come, I’m nearly … at the “few” mark. I’m “ready” to go NOW, clearly, (continued)

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Bri Edwards 18 August 2019

1 - favorite lines: " Time and pain her constant companions I sat and slowly sank into surrounding darkness" to MyPoemList. thanks for sharing! My response: Nearing My End …[ Passing Time While “Passing Away”; Response to John A’Hern’s P H Poem “Innocent Email” ] (continued)

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Oleg Vorobyov 15 October 2018

This is the line where I must stop... Indeed, dear poet, we must stop when an ultimate sorrow overflows, - so does your poem. It is the feeling, not a dexterous and aesthetic arrangement of lines and striking imagery that makes poetry great! The one that cuts to the quick, leaves a scar eventualy to turn a healed wound! I love your piece! Take my dram of solace, just a word of comfort, go on living and sharing!

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