Sunday, January 24, 2016

Innocent Elders Comments

Rating: 5.0

Looking for innocent lovers of a child?
My skin once again is ugly and rough,
Need again an oily bath in a trough,
Some oil on the skin and pleasing the mind,
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 July 2018

Although this poem centers on innocence it also dwells on politics. It is a powerful write brilliantly penned. It delivers wisdom to the minds of readers. A great poem well crafted.10++++

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Khalid Saifullah 25 January 2016

An amazing poem with more than one lovely messages.

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Kelly Kurt 25 January 2016

If we could keep the innocence of a child with us as we aged, the world would be a far better place.

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Valsa George 25 January 2016

This poem in the form of a dialogue between a child and an elderly man brings out many valid truths When the child asked to shoot an eagle in sky, They live thousands of years, let them fly................... Love the lines! Killing of even a bird is dreaded, but now we live in a world where killing of men is a pastime like hunting! ! Great write!

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