Monday, November 2, 2009

Innocent Dead Comments

Rating: 5.0

HEART TO HEART
clasped and cuddled
the mother and baby
lay there in dust
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 12 November 2014

Congratulations Samanyan Lakshminarayanan....Loads and loads of innocent dead are occurring in the war as well as poor zones of the world...very touching...

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Liliana ~el 12 November 2013

Deep

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Lyn Paul 12 November 2013

Who would think that we would still be seeing greed and hatred in this century. It is insane and such a disgrace that these innocent lives mean so little to those killing. Thank you, you have expressed so well

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Babatunde Aremu 12 November 2013

Heart rendering. Natural disasters are devastating. This is well captured in this poem. Good job

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And we thought death was only a serpent in the grass Well, it can rain from above, bombs from the sky so blue Men have invented things that fly not for peace alas But in wars to deliver fire and destruction to the very edge of doom All ye reading this, I welcome you to my page too....

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Lola Montez 12 November 2012

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Lola Montez 12 November 2012

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Rajnish Manga 12 November 2012

Th poem shows the price of life during war where the weapons are unable to tell friend from foe, innocent from the culprit. frozen tragedy.

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Babatunde Aremu 12 November 2012

Very touching. Death is cheap through weapons of wars. Great

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Antonio Liao 10 November 2009

like tears that just fall to the ground....and the sun still hot as the meadow watch curtailing the night setting down the aisle.....thanks for the reminder of life...God bless...a 10 +

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Nikunj Sharma 10 November 2009

Ah! what a touching piece, bringing out the realities of modern world. attcks, wars, guns, bombs......shredding and ripping apart the nations, continents, limbs and human beings...nice poem

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rago rago 10 November 2009

very fine write....................

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Catrina Heart 09 November 2009

war just trims down the life of all innocent beings esp. mothers and children........Great piece! ! !

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Sarwar Chowdhury 09 November 2009

your wording praisworthy! the fact is, events occur here are related with many actions so far..... 10+

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Tsira Goge 08 November 2009

samanyan, Unfortunately innocent mothers and children again perishes... very sad poem...10... Tsira

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Ravi A 08 November 2009

God is not at all responsible for our earthy wars. Man can refrain from it. Man has been given the faculty that is called Intelligence and Heart by god but do we use these tools properly? Standing within this Prakrithi we need these tools for our survival but are we using them? God has been so kind to give us these tools but we simply go on blaming HIM. So long as man considers war to be a necessity for his survival, there is no practical escape for man out of this web. Does our Vedanta say that war is a must? It only shows us the path of Dharma.

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Kranthi Pothineni 08 November 2009

Mornings they leave and the returning evenings will never come. It became part of day to day life. Sad poem.

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Mangla Shanker 08 November 2009

sad and meaningful......10....

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Vidi Writes 08 November 2009

A sensitive reaction to current crisis Blood shed and hatred everywhere, catastrophe. Cry of death and destruction, categorical. Is the pray for peace and tranquility heard beyond the crypt? ? Only a sigh of mourn...

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Swimming in the sea of sadness yet sailing with supreme significance. Well done my friend.

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