Saturday, January 10, 2009

Innocent Black Comments

Rating: 5.0

The gloom of the dark night
Blackens the filth, the squalor, the sleaze
Of narrow streets and inner city hives
Darkens the pavements, the curbs, the walls
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Eddie Roa
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Eddie Roa 13 January 2009

All is not well...black is just a cosmetic coverup for the evils in this world. A bit of irony at the last line.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 13 January 2009

A veritable portrayal of the dark night. You have described the dark night fullfilling its dutiful chore of fleecing all good and evil.You have come up with a new imagery of night percieving it as innocent black. Darkness indeed makes everything identical.....10/10

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iop fga 13 January 2009

So true, but still, '...the dark is a bottomless hole, where evil and malice hold cabal, conspiring against joy and delight...' x) Does that really mean all is well at night time?

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Eddie Roa 11 January 2009

Thanks for the read and the comments Ency Bearish.

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Ency Bearis 11 January 2009

a nice imagery write about twilight into nightime...lovely..10

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Eddie Roa

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Manila. Philippines
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