a tear is torturing a heart filled with grief
and the shadows of humanity prevents the relief
the smoke of cruelty obscures the sun of life
that war continues till our brother we have to fight
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the shadows of humanity i love that word, wow this poem is so good, and i was wondering could i use that as a title for my next poem that i'm going to write :)
very true Besa, but sooner or later that human being will regret everything he did but when this will happens? ? ? i think when it's too late unfortunately and when he tastes what it feels like to be under cruelty...: /
Beautiful poem with a significant meaning to nowadays' situations around the world. Alas, human being is responsible for creating the beautiful and for destroying it at the same time: (( ~Besa
Sahar..Mind blowing.......It's really beautiful...I love ur creativity......U r expressing through ur own eyes
strange feeling i got from this. where r u now? hope ure doing alright