Innocence Regained Comments

Hmmm - is it possible to regain innocence? ? Your poem makes it seem so. Nicely done.

My present should not shadow the past, No doubts should prevail and vote the cast, I want to regain the precious innocence, Excellent poem.10++++++++++

Thank you for favorably commenting on my own poem. I started writing poems that rhyme. Years later, I was advised to just freely express, as prose. Searching for a rhyme detracts and compromises feelings. Let me know when you do another and I can then listen directly from within 'heart', and memory. Sorry, I never rate any poems, only feelings reflected are important. You've much to share, write as you would speak to tell it.

The moment childhood was over, Innocence and good smile lost cover,

Life's ups and downs, trials and triumphs....summed in an introspective write! ! ! !

A nice piece with an introspective touch though perhaps it could have been a bit more subtle in its approach.

in spare time we rememebr old memories...10

in old age we rememebr innocence....10

it is rememebred at later stage....10

childhood rememebred at later stage....10

we rememebr it in lesisure time....10

we rememebr n cherish at our leisure time....10

we try to regain n rememebr it....10

child and old age is almost same...10

it gives us relief in the old age....10

itisrememebred in old age, , , ,10

innocence is remeberd in the old age when sit idle...10

we behave like child in old age....10

innocence rememberd in old age..10

Go easy on the rhyme brother - not all poems need to rhyme 7/10