Innocence Lost. Comments

That was real nice, Deep. Nice to feel it about with words from your the depths of your heart - strong feeling there!

oh devil schemes, to crush gurl's dream, Innocence forever lost At the great cost. Good work

Dear Deepti, devils are all around us.God created them to try his best creation humanbeing. Just think deepti how devils are conquering humanbeing.Let there be a kingdom of pure humanbeing on this planet.Is it possible?

I like the theme. great work deepti.

a bitter truth of mankind....few lines from my new poem on which i'm still working on, thanks my heart shed tears in pain why men has become so insane for few minutes of pleasure and desire it murders every second of humanity

these things happen fr sure..seven year or two year..just pick up the news paper u wil find everyday several cases like these... n the worst part is it happens right inside aur homes.: (.. i hope v cud have some real humans around n not just animals..

sexual assault on a seven year child? my God! the word 'sacred thread' is painfully indicative... deepti, your poem is nice... but my mood spoilt...

very nice and powerful...leaves many impression on my head

Very beatiful description of an innocent girl.But how did her innocence get lost in this process, I could not understand.However it is a very pure poem full of innocence.Excellent work.