Wednesday, February 1, 2023

Innocence Lost Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once children
Now adults
Innocence
Lost in time
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Richard Wlodarski
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Chinedu Dike 02 February 2023

A concise and insightful composition. A beautiful creation...

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Richard Wlodarski 03 February 2023

That means a lot to me, Chinedu!

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 02 February 2023

Something you gain. And lose something. Great philosophy in just four lines

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Richard Wlodarski 02 February 2023

Succinctness has not been a forte of mine. I'm striving to reach it through my poetry. THX for your positivity, Kesav!

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Nosheen Irfan 02 February 2023

Life takes away the innocence. Time is ruthless. Sad reality articulated well.

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Richard Wlodarski 02 February 2023

What we do with that innocence over the course of our lives is what matters. Time can make or destroy us. Nosheen, THX for your insightful comments and positive appraisal.

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M. Asim Nehal 02 February 2023

And time is cruel... Fantastic poem.

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Richard Wlodarski 02 February 2023

Greatly appreciate your enthusiastic response, Dr. Nehal!

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 02 February 2023

child is equal to innocent! is equal to guilt! ? ?

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Richard Wlodarski 02 February 2023

The natural childlike innocence and spiritual wisdom of a Gerard Kerouac has been eroded over the course of time. We only experience guilt if we haven't learned from that innocence.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 February 2023

Very heartfelt

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Richard Wlodarski 01 February 2023

Wait until you read my responses to Dillip. They're brutally honest and very heartfelt. THX, LeeAnn for reading and responding positively!

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Richard Wlodarski 01 February 2023

Sincerest THX, Dillip for being the 1st to read my poem and adding it to your favourites! All The Best!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 February 2023

I gradually lost my innocence and accepted Darwin's concept of survival of fittest in letter and spirit.

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Richard Wlodarski 01 February 2023

I'll take Gerard Kerouac's concept of spirituality and wisdom. And he was only 9 years old when he died. Some had believed that he was a bona fide saint. I guess that I'm an optimistic pacifist!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 February 2023

Moreover, I had to learn some tricks from this sophisticated society to earn my bread and butter....part 2

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Richard Wlodarski 01 February 2023

I was very fortunate to have had some great teachers which eventually led to my professions as counsellor and clinical hypnotherapist.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 February 2023

This poem reminds of my childhood days when I was so innocent. I was eating in my parents hotel and using my father's purse and enjoying things recklessly. However, I was innocent then. As I grew up. gradually I lost my innocence....part 1

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Richard Wlodarski 01 February 2023

I gradually lost mine innocence in fighting the hypocrisy that I was witnessing in my religion. Stopped going to church, but became much more spiritual...to this very day!

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