Tuesday, September 3, 2019

Innocence Lost Comments

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We adults tend to lose ours innocence as the years unfold…
which is why the innocence of our children is a beauty we behold.

Children sing before they realize there even is a song.
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Lodigiana Poetess 03 September 2019

Oh my goodness Jim, your poem reflects so closly the feelings of so many of us appalled by the terrible loss of young lives everywhere and mans desire above all else it seems, to be able to retain their right to 'Bear Arms'...I would rather retain my right to fill my 'arms' with these precious, innocent children..Excellent write my friend xxx10

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Uche Nwanze 03 September 2019

So touching and insightful. We live in a cruel world where our children are prey for sexual predators, paedophiles, an immoral society. I pray we don't come to a time like you espoused in your poem 'There will come a time, if we haven't reached it already when we have no innocence left'.

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