Innocence-Lost Comments

A poem with great depth ma'am arouses the reader's mind's eye.....very meaningful and makes the reader think about the state the world has crumbled itself into....... and thanks for your kind visit to my poems, regards, shan

Innocence lost...yes; you make a good dig there to come out with a meaningful inference...thanks...10

A good write madam.........the last lines clearly depicts the fact. Yet we can retrieve.......splendid write. For this kind stuff I never give marks because these poems beyond the man made marks....quantity. my heartful of thanks for your kind sharing.

Deep stuff here. And we lose our innocence for many reasons..You had some interesting ones.. Cheers. Subroto

Wonderful

Excellent master piece, i have to reread it to take the message well...Unique theme i have read for today....great write, ...10

Costless thrillers, pastime, under the vigilant scanners Salt water couldn’t heal the pain, but it did pivot.....................quite ingenious write,10+, thanks for sharing, Vidi...

Good one vidi.my 10.............

an outstanding poetic creation ma'm.....I simply loved it...10

An extremely inveterating write, Vidi...Lifes stages tempt, take, display, restore & in Death...usually embrace innocence...Your philosophical spin on ''Innocence in the life of.....''', was quite capturing...and as always, young lady... a job very well done! FjR '09