Innocence Lost Comments

I am simply amazed at the beauty of this brief poem, Laurena. Your phrasing in it is nothing short of exquisite. What you wrote of is not an easy subject for both male and female poets to adequately describe. Some are embarrassed and tend to opt for a more fictional account of this moment in their life, and generally fail miserably to write a convincing account. Using a minimum of words, you described this incident flawlessly and beautifully and with dignity. This poem is without question the best I have read on this site, and in a long time as well. You are an extraordinary poet! Carl.

innoncence is gone to the one she love...... their prints are forever in the soil a very romantic poem

Agree with u. Innocence is really lost.

The old, lets take a walk by the pond time.