Oh lord forgive me
for what I have done
I know you shouldn't
go eye for an eye
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My brother life has away of seeing right when wrong and vice vesra the world is said to be round but a close look and you see that it is not...you are not at blame my brother you saw the world round but it is not..good write..from within...I feel you...from a slaves piont of view...
Thanks for the advice.... gr8 poem love it I can relate cause I think about taking his life all da time
The poem leaves the reader thinking was the justice justified..life poses such challenges when hard cruel decisions turn out to be beneficial for the mankind. Good work.
An eye for an eye, is not always the worst case, sometimes, to do less would be to create the most damage. Beautiful writing.
What a sad story....! very very painful. its a real story and must be told, your God will forgive you. That monster would have done more and hurt many....
wow. A powerful and beauitful poem. :)