You always looked straight past me
why couldn't you see the truth
he's been doing this to me for years on end
taking away my youth.
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this is really good. i like how you say what happend without actually saying it. veryyy nice.
u have a wonderful imagination my dear friend..u are a young Edgar Allan Poe in the making..brilliant job!
Dark poetry.No other life is worth the price of our own..pain is the beginning of joy and joy is the certain promise. Words carefully penned.
the words are perfectly laid out on this poem..amazing
Nice wording! finely penned! 10+