Tuesday, April 14, 2009

Innocence Lost Comments

Rating: 5.0

You always looked straight past me
why couldn't you see the truth
he's been doing this to me for years on end
taking away my youth.
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Sabrina Perry
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Sarwar Chowdhury 06 August 2009

Nice wording! finely penned! 10+

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Simply Crazy 27 April 2009

this is really good. i like how you say what happend without actually saying it. veryyy nice.

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 22 April 2009

u have a wonderful imagination my dear friend..u are a young Edgar Allan Poe in the making..brilliant job!

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 14 April 2009

Dark poetry.No other life is worth the price of our own..pain is the beginning of joy and joy is the certain promise. Words carefully penned.

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 14 April 2009

the words are perfectly laid out on this poem..amazing

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