Thursday, December 5, 2019

Innocence Guilty Of Sin - Inspired By Innocent Or Guilty By Howard Simon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Born innocent
Into such sin
Innocently
We traverse life
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Richard Wlodarski
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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 April 2022

A perceptive poem dear poet friend. Thank you so much for your comments on my poems. I am not in a mood to reciprocate now. I am indebted to you!

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Richard Wlodarski 29 April 2022

You are very welcome. Hope you're feeling better soon. Dillip, I'm the one who is indebted to you. From the very beginning, you have been a source of great strength for me. Don't even know where to begin in thanking you!

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Unwritten Soul 05 December 2019

A good poem that to me sounds like a ring, the start and the end is met at one point, a good reminder and a conclusion...and the content is nice toooo..

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Richard Wlodarski 08 December 2019

Soul, thank you so much for your positive constructive criticism.

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Mahtab Bangalee 05 December 2019

innocent the natural born but earthly life drags to illusion and makes the innocent greedy oh the greedy the S I N guilty!

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Richard Wlodarski 05 December 2019

Nice one, Mahtab! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Mamunur Rahman Kayes 05 December 2019

We traverse life So sinfully Now innocence Guilty of sin....this is the truth

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Richard Wlodarski 05 December 2019

It sure is, Mamunur! Thank you for reading and commenting.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 December 2019

Howard Simon is a great motivational poet. Richard, just like you, i am highly inspired by his poems too. Though i have not written a poem yet, i plan to in near future. Yes, born innocent we traverse through a series of sinful existence. Innocence itself suffers guilt of sin. Brilliant write, Richard.......10

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Richard Wlodarski 05 December 2019

I am humbled and honoured, Geeta.

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