Innocence Gone Comments

all torn up inside. her soul, had been crushed, lost, all her pride. She was the angel in side of me, that had gone astray, innocence is gone. Written in great distress.. very much expressive. Very painful…… thank you for your great depiction. You have a rare ability to

all torn up inside. her soul, had been crushed, lost, all her pride. She was the angel in side of me, that had gone astray, innocence is gone. Written in great distress.. very much expressive. Very painful…… thank you for your great depiction. You have a rare ability to write.. thank u. tony

Great poem.

Great idea, shall we recall the innocence back when we return the trust to ourselves, and start to believe everything again........nice work! _Soul