Friday, February 3, 2006

Innocence And Experience Comments

Rating: 5.0

The eyes of a child are sparking black
When they look at you you can't look back.
Innocence and clarity
Emphasize disparity,
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Tan Pratonix
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Moya Levy 09 February 2006

Interesting point you make here, swap all you know for another chance at innocence? Perhaps only to have it robbed from you again, will have to think about that for a while! Moyaxx

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Graham Jones 03 February 2006

They say the eyes mirror the soul, so if they see harsh things in life suppose they may become tarnished slightly, but more likely its just age, but a great poen any way.

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***** ********* 03 February 2006

I doubt that very much Tan. Excellent expression in your work. 10 from saying it like it is! Tai

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