Sunday, June 24, 2012

Innocence - An Autobiography Comments

Rating: 4.9

I don't know when I was born,
Maybe when humanity didn't exist.
I was lost, in the senses of the insentient beings;
Always trying to find something.
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Shouvik Roy
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The Reader 14 July 2012

An impressive autobiography of Innocence personified!

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Valsa George 11 July 2012

This is one of the best poems I have read recently! We all terribly feel the loss of innocence from this world! ! But it lingers some where, some how....It is not yet time to sing its dirge......!

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Natasha Hochar 29 June 2012

Straight to the heart

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Pheko Motaung 27 June 2012

A masterly crafted masterpiece! Keep on writing

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Amy Collins 26 June 2012

Your poems are so emotionally tied to them. You could vividly see you in this poem reminded me of another poem the fisherman by kurt brown. Great Job!

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Meena Mustafa 25 June 2012

Loved the expression. It's true that in this mean and selfish world one has to surrive no matter how. You are very talanted and I enjoyed reading your poems. Keep up the good work.

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Indira Babbellapati 25 June 2012

and you will continue to be alive... it's a circle and we go round n round!

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Shikha Shah 25 June 2012

True...... in this selfish world people have to kill their innocence to survive... loved the way u expressed this... :) keep expressing!

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Neela Nath Das 24 June 2012

Right you are.Innocence is no more.Only in infancy and in second childhood, in the smile of the mother with her child or in abstract things innocence may be found.There is a ray of hope in it.

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