Wednesday, January 25, 2012

Innocence Comments

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Paper doll made of indigo ink
Soul devoid of concealment
Naked and pure.
Reflection of innocence
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Nancy M. Godfrey
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Khairul Ahsan 11 April 2014

Loved reading your poem, though I did not quite understand the first stanza. 'Fragrance of life remains in a lonely world Etched in tattered fragments of memory.' - So beautifully said! Loved these lines.

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Sylvia Lukeman 25 January 2012

Your poem is beautiful, the words poignant..as I read each line my sadness deepened. As always I enjoyed reading your poetry Thank you for you warm words about my verses xx

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Nancy M. Godfrey

Nancy M. Godfrey

Wilmington, Delaware
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