Monday, October 31, 2011

Innocence Comments

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When I was small, I was taught
you don't judge people on how they look.
Years later, this happened,
and the story repeats itself.
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Jacqui Broad
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The 4am Poet Worm 05 November 2011

your heart is clearly on your sleeve.... along with your skills of oservation

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Crimson Love 01 November 2011

This poem is extremly insightful, and sadly true, the appearance of one should'nt affect ones sight, beauty isn't just on the surface, Its much deeper than that.

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Eric Cockrell 31 October 2011

this one is a jolt... the cruelty of our inhuman acts and words... strong, thought provoking piece!

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Stefanie Fontker 31 October 2011

Sad world this is. An outward appearance is just that, a shallow surface. Insightful writing, as always, my friend.

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