Thursday, July 23, 2009

Innocence Comments

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dont you love it when its really early in the morning?
And you feel like you're the only one awake.
You feel like you dont have to hide anything.
It wonderful, So innocent.
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paige mee
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Keith Foley 23 July 2009

Super, this is a really cool poem. I really enjoyed the concept of the early morning feeling of utopia and how it faded away. Brilliant.

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