Saturday, July 4, 2009

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kafil uddin raihan.
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Ejaz Khan 04 July 2009

Good work Kafil, keep it up!

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Priyanka Bhowmick 04 July 2009

a gud n true thought.. 1 suggestion it wud luk better if u make the 1st line as 'All men r innocent' instead of 'all the man r innocent.... and the 4th line as 'All souls r innocent' instead of 'all the soul r innocent..' thank u...

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kafil uddin raihan.

kafil uddin raihan.

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