Innocence Comments

I love these lines: he conveys evrything in laughter and cry like we grown ups have never bothered to try that poem is amazing and I agree with ur thoughts. very good poetic devices too I love it

wonderful...but why do you use short forms in words, text a lot with mobile huh! maybe? , would be good if words are complete but its just my suggestion...i dont like to advice! ...keep posting :)

this is a lovely one. babies r innocent n dats wat captures people.

very true. i loved the way you said it. :)

very true...a baby is a delight and you have captured its innocence