Innocence Comments

i remember this! ! I liked it then, and I like it now...best line: 'remember temptation? '. Profundity within minimalism, my dear, quite a feat.

I like the imagary and how you jumped from one scene to another. Good Job!

i like it it's very um descriptive

The image of a new beginning is incredible.

:) Holy crizap! That was very amazing, just like you are :)