Tuesday, May 7, 2019

Innocence Comments

Rating: 3.5

Even the call of you is pleasant
Evoking a soft and gentle feel
Just like it is when you were within
Giving a feel of serenity
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Hannatu Adamu 06 September 2020

Truly, nothing quite bursts the bubble like growing up! While we're children, no rules, no responsibilities, no worries!

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Manpreet Singh 07 May 2019

The day we lose our innocence we leave behind childhood and enter painfull adulthood. This poem touches some deep feelings. Well written.

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