Thursday, January 25, 2007

Innocence Comments

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Society deems the strong hold the power
The weak are controlled then slowly devoured
Guided by greed with no will of their own
Some lives will be shattered by the toss of a stone
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Deanna More 07 February 2007

Patty, I love this pristine Rhythm + Rhyme poem! Very thought provoking! (10 for you!) Deanna xx ..

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Chad Fisher 25 January 2007

I deleted my previous message, it just didn't seem to do justice to the poem. Its a terrible world we live in, when rage, hate, unforgiveness, and bitter hearts get in the way of creating a better happy, peaceful and positive lifestyle for all of us to share.

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I M Swan

I M Swan

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