Monday, March 30, 2015

Innocence Comments

Rating: 5.0

You can walk on the road I cannot walk,
You can balk your hate but I cannot balk,
You can talk to God but I cannot talk,
Whether it is land or air or a beach,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalida Bano Ali 06 July 2018

Children are children and are always innocent.

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Khalid Saifullah 22 October 2017

Innocent children are welcomed every where.....................................

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Valsa George 04 April 2015

'Innocence thy charms are infinite'........! So very true! A sweet song on innocence, expressing indirectly a hidden sense of loss that our innocence has vanished with age. Your grand children and son- in- law (I suppose) look adorable in the picture!

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Akhtar Jawad 04 April 2015

The man in the pictures is not my son-in-law, he is pilot of the aircraft, and he was kind enough to allow the children in the cockpit.

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Amitava Sur 03 April 2015

Beautifully explained the innocence what I believe as per excellence. So long innocence remains in somebody, he or she can witness the beauty of wisdom.

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Hazel Durham 01 April 2015

Beautiful write, innocence is beauty, it is a light shining so bright in a world sometimes dark!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 March 2015

Your holy journey I am sure will be nice, Innocence is magic and will get the price, Innocence is beauty, beautiful His vice, Saw your photographs in the cockpit, I salute your wit, I salute the writ! very nice presentation, I like all these lines. Well done........10/10

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Akhtar Jawad 30 March 2015

Thanks Jenie.........................................

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Khalida Bano Ali 30 March 2015

A beautiful poem..................10

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Jenie Franksay 30 March 2015

a nice poem.. it made my day... kindly have a look at my poems and give your valueable feedback.. thanks a lot... :)

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Akhtar Jawad 30 March 2015

My grandchildren, son and daughter of my sweet daughter, on way to Makkah for performing Umrah.

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