Monday, April 21, 2014

Innocence Comments

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When falling off the cliff they cry,
hurting the iris of their eye,
flying before they learn to fly,
whose words will kiss their tears to dry?
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Magdalena Biela
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Dr Antony Theodore 02 March 2019

When falling off the cliff they cry, hurting the iris of their eye, flying before they learn to fly, whose words will kiss their tears to dry? I am the Catcher in the Rye. the very first stanza attracted me..... you are very different.. in your writing and execution of the theme in the poem. tony

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Magdalena Biela 03 March 2019

This poem was inspired by the inner heart of Salinger's " Catcher in the rye" , a book I deeply love...Thank you heartily...

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Fabrizio Frosini 15 January 2015

l'ho appena letta.. e non posso fare a meno di brindare (virtualmente) al tuo estro poetico, Magdalena! ahh.. questo passaggio è sublime: but I, / I was the Catcher in the Rye, e la tua nota For myself, for my inner child... è un'altra chiave di lettura e insieme un altro verso.. Yep, LIKE-LIKE-LIKE ;)

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