Monday, February 11, 2013

Innocence Comments

Rating: 2.8

Mamma, when will I grow tall like you
As now I am looked up by very few;
I wanna fit into Paapa's shoes
Now for me its very loose!
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Dr Antony Theodore 23 August 2015

Beautiful feelings in simple words. i liked it very much Poetess Kavya

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Geetha Jayakumar 26 July 2013

Very beautiful write...How Innocent children are......Each line is interesting...Good poem.

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Subbaraman N V 02 April 2013

Who can change the nature of life? Like it or not one has to grow and face the challenges bold and clean!

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Valsa George 19 February 2013

Your six year old represents a class of innocents! Now they are blissfully ignorant of the hurdles lying ahead! Life would be harder for the coming generation than it is for us is a nagging thought for all the grown ups! A beautiful write Kavya!

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Praneeth Remidi 11 February 2013

Ooooofffooo..... you..few. shoes.. loose... i enjoyed reading this...

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Chandra Thiagarajan 11 February 2013

The innocence of a six year old and his high aspirations are beautifully brought out in your exemplary poem!

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