Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, February 21, 2015

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Many stories I had read
About living persons and dead
Kids of all ages used to speak about ghosts
We all were seized with different sorts
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 February 2015

Re: Inning was by mac on Saturday, February 21,2015 (18: 58: 54) stanza four doesn't seem to fit your rhyme scheme, (aabb) and stanza two, lines three and four are a bit of a stretch, may just be me and regional pronunciation of certain words. I did enjoy the subject matter and message. mac

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 February 2015

Medy Villapando likes this. Medy Villapando A nice poem 2 mins · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 February 2015

Many stories I had read About living persons and dead

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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