Monday, July 28, 2008

Inner Tears Comments

Rating: 3.3

No one can see me crying
Within I feel like I am dying

No one can hear my silent cries
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Vinod Kumar 16 June 2009

Expressed reality tottally in it, great work, smile with holding inner fire is tough too, nobody knows that and it gives us more courage, thanks for sharing such a different common version of life,10+

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Daniel Allen 28 July 2008

A wonderful rhyme you write. It speaks to me about what youve lost and how much you care.

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