Wednesday, May 2, 2007

Inner Sense Or Lost Innocence? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fresh leaves round Eve's hair proffer proof that sly snake
once tempted rash maid to partake of sweet tree,
Alas far from Paradise flesh had to flee,
sin[ce] then Man atones for mad mor[t]al mistake.
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Jonathan ROBIN
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Derrick Clark 02 May 2007

that was some good writing, keep it up.

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